Internet user
Two data provided are pointing the internet activities in several major countries in Europe. First data
reveals empirical data interpreting the total number of internet users in 1995-2004 whilst the second
data accounts percentage of sales of internet-based shopping in 2004. At the first glance, British
people mainly utilize the internet the most during the period among other countries.
Becoming popular since 1995, internet in UK has the highest active users of 16 millions compared to
other nations which have an insignificant users of under 5 millions. For the next decades, Internet
popularity to the UK’s citizen steadily rise - indicated by an increasing number of internet users - until
reach 41-million users in 2004. In spite of an exponential increase in France in 2000, internet users in
Switzerland, Germany, and Spain escalate slightly over the years.
As the obvious data designated, UK contribute to almost 50-percent sales of internet shopping in
Europe due to its outstanding number of internet users in 2004.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 43, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'user'?
Suggestion: user
...her nations which have an insignificant users of under 5 millions. For the next decad...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 36, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (UK) must be used with a third-person verb: 'contributes'.
Suggestion: contributes
...rs. As the obvious data designated, UK contribute to almost 50-percent sales of internet ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53416149068 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85944858921 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621118012422 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7644391079 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.285714286 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 3.83414634146 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.541550805087 0.215688989381 251% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.272123486662 0.103423049105 263% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106300312181 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226210181 0.15604864568 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126931149634 0.0819641961636 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.