Leisure time in a typical week in hour by sex and employment status, 1989 - 1999
The bar graph represents the information about the number of hours spent in leisure activities by the male and female on the basis of their employment status.
Overall, the unemployed and retired male and female spent more hours in spare time activities while employed and housewives spent less hours in leisure time activities.
From the bar chart, it is lucid that unemployed male spent 84 hours in leisure activities, which was more than the time spent by retired males that is 82 hours. However, the unemployed and retired female tend to showed same hours participation in spare time activities.
Movingahead, housewives spent 10 hours more than the part time employed females that is 40 hours. Furthermore, the men who were employed full time had showed more interest in leisure activities and spent 44 hours per week and 38 hours were spent by the women's. Also, the data for men who are employed part time and stayed at home had not available in the chart.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...ies while employed and housewives spent less hours in leisure time activities. From the...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ies while employed and housewives spent less hours in leisure time activities. Fr...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sure activities, which was more than the time spent by retired males that is 82 h...
^^
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hours'' or 'hour's'?
Suggestion: hours'; hour's
... and retired female tend to showed same hours participation in spare time activities....
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...housewives spent 10 hours more than the part time employed females that is 40 hours. Furt...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... Furthermore, the men who were employed full time had showed more interest in leisure act...
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Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...Also, the data for men who are employed part time and stayed at home had not available in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92682926829 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56439956943 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.25942255 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.428571429 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280909147504 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157341564528 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544011590062 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199280316354 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426706076186 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.