With the fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
Replacing daily meals with the junk food is become a common norm in the modern era. Nowadays, due to busy life schedules peoples are no longer cook food at home and prefer to eat fast food from restaurants. In my opinion, it has more demerits than merits.
To begin with, the nutritional value of fast food is very low as compared to the cuisine cook at home. Moreover, eating fast food daily leads to obesity and other diseases like cardiovascular, hepatic etcetera. For instance- a survey was conducted by WHO in India on teenagers proved that those eat junk food like pizza, burger are less active or healthy than the younger ones who take proper balanced diet.
Besides that, it also increase the communication between family members. As fast food is never eaten together sitting around a table. Everybody wants to eat according to their wish. For example- children prefer to eat by sit against front of television. Furthermore, over use of fast food result in loss of opportunity to cook and talk together. Hence, it give rise to conversation gap.
To conclude, i feel that invention of fast food is bringing more harmful effects than positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88324873096 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61854158453 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680203045685 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5807914683 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259081183425 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840235679795 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550464722291 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163580055904 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411303003246 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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