Some people say that advertising encourage us to buy things that we really do not need others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
In todays world, advertisement has become a significant tool for marketing a product. Some persons argue that marketing induce us to buy things that are unnecessary while others believe that it raises our awareness about the new products that might helps in improve lives. I strongly agree that advertisement enhance our knowledge regarding new inventions.
The first and foremost, benefit of marketing is, it provides a huge information about the new devices coming in market and helps in reducing the work load. For instance, a survey was conducted by russia on university students and it proved that student uses new version appliances were were able to work more speedy and edficiently than the students who used old versions. Secondly, many companies advertise the job postings on newspapers and in this in turn helps individuals get employment.
Lastly, marketing inform us about the discount on latest appliances. However, it benefits both the consumers and the producers by raising sale or purchase. On the other hand, advertisement persuaded us to follow the latest trends and fashions. For example, companies use celebrities to advertise their products and people convinced because of the way they advertise.
As per my opinion, advertisement is crucial for individuals, companies but it also needs to be controlled by government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: were
...hat student uses new version appliances were were able to work more speedy and edficientl...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...tudent uses new version appliances were were able to work more speedy and edficientl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3981042654 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00191982775 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658767772512 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0661588965 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.545454545 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251782885093 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951398807139 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738490221887 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150978937811 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10165453005 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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