Level of participation

Essay topics:

Level of participation

Taking a quick glance, it is quite evident that the highest proportion are marked in industrialized countries but developed countries are lowest in 1980 and 1990.

To begin with, the developed countries attended the school average of 2.5year in 1980 but in 1990 it rose by 0.5. However, industrialized countries stood at 9 in 1980 but next decades attendance of school average reached at 11years. Moving further, the number of scientists and technicians in developed countries stood at 10 and 40 respectively but in 1990 it increased by 8 and 15per 1000 people.

Moving to accompanying bar chart, developed countries people had spend less money on research and development but the majority of participation spend their money on research and development.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'decades'' or 'decade's'?
Suggestion: decades'; decade's
...d countries stood at 9 in 1980 but next decades attendance of school average reached at...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...r chart, developed countries people had spend less money on research and development ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...r chart, developed countries people had spend less money on research and development ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 639.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 121.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28099173554 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11277456307 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595041322314 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 180.0 283.868780488 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.231188427 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.75 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0323576651473 0.215688989381 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0196624017704 0.103423049105 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340562788652 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0262165356939 0.15604864568 17% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370757803367 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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