The line chart gives information about the population rate in four different countries from 1970 to 2010 and it is estimated to 2030.

Essay topics:

The line chart gives information about the population rate in four different countries from 1970 to 2010 and it is estimated to 2030.

The line chart gives information about the population rate in four different countries from 1970 to 2010 and it is estimated to 2030.

Overall, the proportion of population increases in each country between 1970 and 2030. It is noticeable that USA has the largest population during the entire period.
In 1970, 70% of residents in US lived in cities, compared to 40% of Korea and 20% of China and India each. The percentage of population in USA and in Korea rose significantly over the next 40 years, reaching under 90% and 85% respectively. During the same period China population witnessed a climb sharp to over 60% in 2010, exceeding the figure for India, which had only over 30% at the same time.

Looking into the future, the percentage of citizens in USA and in Korea is expected to rise gradually to 90% each from 2020 to 2030. By 2030, it is forecast that people who lived in China will rise to 65%, whereas the figure for India will be predicted to remain at 35% at the end.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61016949153 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54666304691 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564971751412 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8790694593 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358959812269 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186053245887 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.312647608508 0.0843802449381 371% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328659553586 0.15604864568 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.390611976004 0.0819641961636 477% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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