The line graph below provide the information about the incomes of four restaurants in a city in 2010

Essay topics:

The line graph below provide the information about the incomes of four restaurants in a city in 2010.

The graph illustrates how the incomes of 4 restaurants fluctuated in a city during 12 months in 2010, namely Delicacy, Evening Paradise, Grand Fiesta, Spicy Fortune.

In general, what stood out from the graph was that the income of Spicy Fortune decreased significantly in the latter part of the year. It was clear to see three of them experienced upward patterns, with the exception of a sum of the income money of Spicy Fortune.

In the first half of 2010, employers in Spicy Fortune restaurants earned 160$ in the first month, which was the highest income when compared to others. The ones in Delicacy, Evening Paradise, Grand Fiesta received 100$, 50$ and 30$ respectively. Over the following 6 months, the income which the Spicy Fortune restaurant received fell slightly to 120$ in month, while the income of Evening Paradise rose gently of 35$.

By December of this year, it was immediately obvious that the income of the Spicy Fortune restaurant was the lowest, a downward to 50$ in the later of this year. In the meantime, the income of the Evening Paradise restaurant registered the highest money, at under 200$.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...ee of them experienced upward patterns, with the exception of a sum of the income money of Spicy Fort...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$160'.
Suggestion: $160
...ers in Spicy Fortune restaurants earned 160$ in the first month, which was the highe...
^^^^
Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100'.
Suggestion: $100
...Evening Paradise, Grand Fiesta received 100$, 50$ and 30$ respectively. Over the fol...
^^^^
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$50'.
Suggestion: $50
...g Paradise, Grand Fiesta received 100$, 50$ and 30$ respectively. Over the followin...
^^^
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$30'.
Suggestion: $30
...se, Grand Fiesta received 100$, 50$ and 30$ respectively. Over the following 6 mont...
^^^
Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$120'.
Suggestion: $120
...ne restaurant received fell slightly to 120$ in month, while the income of Evening P...
^^^^
Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$35'.
Suggestion: $35
...come of Evening Paradise rose gently of 35$. By December of this year, it was im...
^^^
Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$50'.
Suggestion: $50
...estaurant was the lowest, a downward to 50$ in the later of this year. In the meant...
^^^
Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$200'.
Suggestion: $200
... registered the highest money, at under 200$.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96315789474 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64045345724 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515789473684 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6431862772 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.875 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190001603294 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091493205023 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058317129071 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132170271806 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489290100126 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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