The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch two cities in New Zealand and London and Edinburgh two cities in the United Kingdom

Essay topics:

The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom.

The line graph illustrates the change of temperature in two particular counties with four different cities including Auckland, Christchurch, London, and Edinburgh on a regular basis during a 12-month period.
In general, the initial impression from the chart is that the alternation of temperature was inversely proportional to separate geological positions. It is notable that the highest temperature in the UK was registered in summer while the winter months in New Zealand experienced the hottest atmosphere.
As can be seen, both cities in New Zealand saw a similar trend in terms of average daily temperature. January was the hottest month in Auckland and Christchurch, reaching its peak at approximately 23 degrees. Their figures declined significantly, with some fluctuations reaching a low of 110C in July for the former and 150C in August for the latter prior to recovering almost their initial levels in the last month of the year.
It is apparent that also mirroring the trajectory was two cities in the UK. Both cities witnessed the coldest temperature during the first months of the year, with roughly 50C. However, the subsequent five months saw an overall increase of 150C to peak their highest points at over 200C in the middle of the year before also dipping to the same level around December.

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Average: 4.7 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17840375587 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94054915497 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596244131455 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2025292936 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.555555556 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268663259032 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108731744277 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923789654466 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162424917524 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883745608 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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