The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperature for Auckland and Christchurch, two sites in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two sites in the United Kingdom.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows the annual heat in Auckland and Christchurch, New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, United Kingdom on a monthly basis.
Overall, four countries remained practically unchanged at the end of the year, as at the beginning. At the beginning of the year New Zealand's both countries temperature level out about 25°C warm. Meanwhile, London's two countries temperature remain above 5°C cold. During a half part of year the weather condition starts noticeably change, which presents a dramatically increase at about 20°C in London's and decrease at less than 15 °C in New Zealand's counties between mid-July and mid-August. However, due to Autumn and Winter seasons the climate become climbing in Auckland and Christchurch at 20°C, meanwhile, it plummets in London and Edinburgh at 5°C.
To sum up, the weather temperature become colder in the summer season in New Zealand's two countries and it show completely the opposite pattern to the two British cities. However London and Edinburgh have lower temperature than Auckland and Christchurch.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 53, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...he weather temperature become colder in the summer season in New Zealands two countries and it sh...
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Line 13, column 108, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shows'?
Suggestion: shows
...on in New Zealands two countries and it show completely the opposite pattern to the ...
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Line 13, column 172, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...site pattern to the two British cities. However London and Edinburgh have lower tempera...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29949238579 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88745492863 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497461928934 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9371490696 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292497708631 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138847667769 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974112900857 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222914418516 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796553586967 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.