The line graph demonstrates how the percentage of British families that owned different number of cars oscillated between 1971 and 2007.
The line graph given exhibits the amount of new residential built-in four regions , northeast,midwest, south, and west during the time period from 2006 to 2012. Overall, the number of single family homes in south of united states swelled, while the quantity of homes which was built in midwest surged.
Looking at the line representing construction of homes in south of united states ,there began higher than midwest homes ,with 900,000 homes in 2006. This number plunged considerably to almost 300,000 homes in the following four years. Howevere,before swelling by leaps and bounds to almost 300,000 homes in 2012, there was a noticeable slump in the amount of midwest homes to almost 300,000 homes in 2010.
As to the mideast region, it can be seen that there began at around 200,000 homes in 2006, then there was a hefty staggering under 100,000 homes, which was ht rock bottom during the period presented. Finally, the number of homes in west region and North experienced a markedly fall to nearly 90,000 homes in 2012.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of new residential built-in four regions , northeast,midwest, south, and west duri...
^^
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , midwest
...ential built-in four regions , northeast,midwest, south, and west during the time period...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ction of homes in south of united states ,there began higher than midwest homes ,w...
^^
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s ,there began higher than midwest homes ,with 900,000 homes in 2006. This number ...
^^
Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , before
...es in the following four years. Howevere,before swelling by leaps and bounds to almost ...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...number of homes in west region and North experienced a markedly fall to nearly 9...
^^
Line 11, column 268, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('markedly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('fall') instead of another adjective.
...s in west region and North experienced a markedly fall to nearly 90,000 homes in 2012.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...region and North experienced a markedly fall to nearly 90,000 homes in 2012.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, look, so, then, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05847953216 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62746960756 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4330169033 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.571428571 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0498747931426 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324059310726 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241188534495 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0426204835402 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304935448974 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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