The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries the pie chart the percentage of books by type that were borrowed over this time

Essay topics:

The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, the pie chart the percentage of books,by type that were borrowed over this time.

The line graph describes the figures of the texts that were loaned from four different libraries between the month of June and August in the year 2014 while the pie chart reveals the proportion in percentage for each type of books borrowed during this time.

Overall, it is clear that the number of books borrowed from Ryeslip declined during this period while from West Eaton and Church Mount increased steadily.
The highest proportion of books rented out during this season was on fiction.

To start with, the number of books borrowed from West Eaton and Church Mount in June was 50, this rose steadily to 150 books in August for west Easton and remain unchanged till September.
Whereas for church Mount it increases throughout and stopped at 150 in September.
However for Ryeslip it started with 300 books in June to plummet at 175 books September.
Moreover for Sutton wood, the pattern of the graph was quite different, the total number of books borrowed was 250 in June,rose slightly to 275 in July and drastically declined to 100 in August which later skyrocketed to 300 in September.

Surprisingly, the highest proportion of books loaned from the libraries was on fiction at 43 percent.
The other types of books are on self-help, history, science and biography with the percentages within the range of 10 to 19 percent.
The least borrowed books was about self-help at 10 percent.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, as for, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96610169492 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48355695658 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491525423729 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.28001207 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.2 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 3.83414634146 261% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372125936021 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151242351103 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130874101088 0.0843802449381 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151242351103 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130874101088 0.0819641961636 160% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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