The map below shows the changes in an American town between 1948 and 2010.
The given charts depict the information about the American town which had shown the variations between 1948 and 2010.
It is crystal clear from the map, in 1948, one petrol station (north side) and eleven residential houses (south-east) were not replaced after 62 years. In north east side of the town four factories had been build near the main road in the year 1948 but in 2010 its changed in airport and with three cammercial buildings.
In addition, in 1948, at the bottom left hand corner of the American town, the church was situated and it was replaced by sports stadium in 2010. The count of trees had been same in both of years and also no any changes in the roads.
Oveall, many types changes in American town had been noticed during the given years
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., in 1948, one petrol station north side and eleven residential houses south-east...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ouses south-east were not replaced after 62 years. In north east side of the town...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...rch was situated and it was replaced by sports stadium in 2010. The count of trees had...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...had been same in both of years and also no any changes in the roads. Oveall, ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 629.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.625 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14513158871 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 171.9 283.868780488 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8769334926 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312389173862 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148465501548 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720196163855 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191960028252 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462155458206 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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