The map below shows the outline of the village named Chorleywood from 1868 to 1994.

Essay topics:

The map below shows the outline of the village named Chorleywood from 1868 to 1994.

The map below shows the outline of the village named Chorleywood from 1868 to 1994.
Overall, four different periods of development are shown on the map, and the village was constructed with three types of transportation.
Between 1868 and 1883, Park and Golf course were located in the center of the village, and the main roads were also built in the north and the west of Chorleywood. The village Station was added in the southwest of the center from 1883 to 1922 when the Railway was built across the Station and the western main road in the south in 1909.
The expansion of Chorleywood continued on each side of the Station until 1970. At that time, the Motorway, which went across the northern main road and railway, was built in the east of the village. Besides, further development of the village took place around the motorway intersection with the railway and one of the main roads from 1970 to 1994.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70625 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46911389723 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51875 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3713216956 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336991851712 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204738019175 0.103423049105 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.326733215344 0.0843802449381 387% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324209700363 0.15604864568 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.390186217604 0.0819641961636 476% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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