The map elucidates the information about town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket is to be build for the town and also shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
A closer look at illustration reveals that, the total population of the town is 65,000. Firstly, the large area of the city is countryside. Along with this, two industrial areas also there one is in north direction and other is in south direction. Most of the middle area of the town is covered by housing space. Moreover, the town centre is situated at the bottom of housing. Railway track starts from North-East direction and passes through the middle of the town centre. Finally, railway track finish at the south-West part of the town.
Furthermore, two places planned to build supermarket one is in country side and other one is in town centre. Further, the s1 is located in between railway track and main road with population around 10,000 people. Lastly, s2 is near the railway track in town centre with no traffic zone. Around 29,000 people use cransdon road coming from town centre.
Overall, s2 is better place to build supermarket because this is situated near to the housing and infustrial area. Large number of people using cransdon road and there is no traffic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, lastly, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87735849057 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56719937635 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514150943396 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.786106471 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.9333333333 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1333333333 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27500931769 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952357100317 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121024626594 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211318702579 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.212182838299 0.0819641961636 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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