It is an irrefutable fact that, in this modern era position of females has changed in society from last two decades. Nowdays, most of women are working and cannot stay at home to take care of their children. Young people face lots of problems such as juvenile delinquency. I agree with this statement and discuss my views in upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, first major point is that children learn many things from their parents and it is very important for parents to spend time with their children. Moreover, if parents cannot guve time to their children and they start spending most of time by playing out of house they intract with bad society and start doing crimes. Along with this, married women wants to work work all time to earn money to fulfill their needs but, if they cannot give time to their children it also affect on their curriculam performance.
Furthermore, children feel lack of parents support and cannot give attention to their future plans. Also, children start avoiding their studies. Additionally, children not avail to learn good or bad things in society and start taking drugs For instance, when children take drugs it effects on them mentally and physically so, it become necessary to send them to juvenile centre to learn good things. Lastly, working females cannot spend time with their children due to this kids face some serious problems in their life.
All in a nutshell, I reitreate that it is very important for parents to spend time their children. This helps them to learn good things and kids stay away from bad society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the women') or simply say ''most women''.
Suggestion: most of the women; most women
...society from last two decades. Nowdays, most of women are working and cannot stay at home to ...
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Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: work
...Along with this, married women wants to work work all time to earn money to fulfill their...
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Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...not give time to their children it also affect on their curriculam performance. Fu...
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Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...not give time to their children it also affect on their curriculam performance. Furth...
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Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
... on them mentally and physically so, it become necessary to send them to juvenile cent...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...t spend time with their children due to this kids face some serious problems in thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87686567164 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34317365937 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526119402985 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.026517241 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.538461538 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198946696764 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856232818831 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710827397541 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140443371434 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987387990908 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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