in this contemporary world it is thought by a few individuals get it has been best option to accept was situation as it is without thinking much while others advocate that improving the situation is the best way although I am tending towards later view I will discuss both view points in the following paragraph
on the one hand there are myriad reasons behind the acceptance of worse situation one of the most prominent reasons is that right from the childhood people had many negative things from their parents and their relative relative to the difficulties of life these things made them to believe that it is impossible to change their situation and they have to suffer a lot in their life apart from that many people may not have the courage to change the situation or do not want to take risk in their life for example in today's cut throat competition it is very difficult to find a job if they leave their job in order to get their dreams to of them might end up by losing the existing job
on the other and I agree with those who are you in the favour of improvement first and foremost people must consider that human have the ability to change the situation and like animals one is responsible to write their own fate so why do not we it right our future interesting another point to consider is that life without improvement will become boring even people do not like to use old mobile phone and application and they like updated version of their phones similarly it is necessary for people to make them better version of their results
Inka pujan despite having the the fact that it is difficult to change one situation I think it is better to improve our current situation
- SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT IT IS BEST TO ACCEPT A BAD SITUATION SUCH AS AN UNSATISFACTORY JOB OR SHORTAGE OF MONEY OTHERS ARGUE THAT IT IS BETTER TO TRY AND IMPROVE SUCH SITUATIONS DISCUSS BOTH WITH OPINION 67
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- In spite of advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this case What can be done about this problems 56
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
in this contemporary world it is thought b...
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Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'been the best'.
Suggestion: been the best
...thought by a few individuals get it has been best option to accept was situation as it is...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: relative
...ive things from their parents and their relative relative to the difficulties of life these thing...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rights'?
Suggestion: rights
...rite their own fate so why do not we it right our future interesting another point to...
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Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ir results Inka pujan despite having the the fact that it is difficult to change one...
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Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ir results Inka pujan despite having the the fact that it is difficult to change one...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, similarly, so, while, apart from, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 5.60731707317 767% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 965.302439024 144% => OK
No of words: 306.0 196.424390244 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53921568627 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41624404689 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 106.607317073 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52614379085 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 283.868780488 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 306.0 22.4926829268 1360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1389.0 112.824112599 1231% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 306.0 22.9334400587 1334% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 70.0 5.23603664747 1337% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.014425582244 0.215688989381 7% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.014425582244 0.103423049105 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00758997357652 0.15604864568 5% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0090456825085 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 153.0 13.2329268293 1156% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -230.65 61.2550243902 -377% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 121.5 10.3012195122 1179% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.53 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.39 8.06136585366 265% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.4329268293 472% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 124.4 10.9970731707 1131% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 122.0 11.0658536585 1102% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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