The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its
development.
The maps illustrate the current Islip town center and the variety of that area in the future.Overall, the center is expected to experience a drastic change, with the vanishing of the countryside and the appearance of manifold modern amenities
Noticeably, this place will witness the emerging of a dual carriageway which form a ring around the center. Beside, the traffic-free zone for pedestrians will provide a substitute for the main road now, The chain of stores which is in the north side of the center now will be demolished and make room for a bus station, a shopping center, a car park and a new housing area linking with the carriageway by a small path to the right side.
In the middle of the map, there is a range of shops which will remain stable in the future. To the south ,while the central housing will be relocated to the south west,there will be a new residential area located in the vicinity of the park, which will dwindle in the future.
By contrast, the school and housing area next to the outer edge of the dual carriageway will almost stay unchanged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Overall
... the variety of that area in the future.Overall, the center is expected to experience a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... appearance of manifold modern amenities Noticeably, this place will witness the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...edestrians will provide a substitute for the main road now, The chain of stores w...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...emain stable in the future. To the south ,while the central housing will be reloc...
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Suggestion:
...table in the future. To the south ,while the central housing will be relocated to...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...sing will be relocated to the south west,there will be a new residential area located ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66492146597 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69703137454 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523560209424 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.794990607 43.030603864 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.2 112.824112599 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992643516659 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496009619669 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479419072593 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0546046886653 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452286483498 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.2329268293 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.