The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
TThe maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the sitehe maps demonstrate the changeover plan of the recent industrial area in the town of Norbiton into a residential area in the future.
Overall, the targeted site is located east of the town and sandwiched by the river and one main road. Across the river, farmland is settled separately on the north side.
Currently, it can be seen that the primal scheme of the site is quite rough and separated, whose traffic system merely contains two shapes of the route, including a roundabout that connects with two straight roads. The center of the area is dominated by several industrial factories scattered along the main path.
Meanwhile, houses and complementary facilities are planned to be constructed to convert this location into a residential area. The infrastructure is scheduled to be updated and redeveloped with an advanced quantity of new routes and one additional roundabout filled with plenty of housing. The farmland on the north is to be connected with the area by a crossover bridge, and accommodation is also to be constructed here. In addition, a range of supporting buildings is available on the plan, namely shops, a school, a playground, and a medical center.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05188679245 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98493234609 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561320754717 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4350274031 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396330399895 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126681297724 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.208108775848 0.0843802449381 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236604905957 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.272301326802 0.0819641961636 332% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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