The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned
future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
The maps depict the considerable transformation to Norbiton which currently is an industrial area.
Overall, there are many new buildings erected and some factories have been converted to housing for the people.
First and Foremost, currently, a river flows freely towards the northern part of area, which remains undisturbed in the future plan as well, although a flyover is built across the river that leads to a housing area towards the north that oversees the water. As of now this space is occupied by a farmland. Additionally, the south of the flyover connects to the central block thus eliminating a factory on its way. The north-western part holds space for a factory, which is going to be replaced by a pathway starting from central block to several houses.
The east part of the region is modernised to build a playground and school. The pathway is untouched and leads to school, where there a factory now. Towards the left of north of the pathway is the playground that is led by a small connecting road and the factories are transformed to houses. Likewise, the south of the town is replenished with shops and medical centre on either side of the road connects to a small roundabout which is presently missing. The path on the south remains the same except for a round block.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nised to build a playground and school. The pathway is untouched and leads to schoo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, likewise, so, thus, well, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84234234234 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74358346387 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536036036036 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1763751409 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7272727273 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0865852733704 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326011655697 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609461834982 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715435468504 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811654304285 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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