The maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourists facilities.
The provided layout compares the changes made on the island after construction with the previous condition of the island. It is clear and coherent representation.
Overall, it is evident that construction is made on the island without harming the enviornment; instead, more trees are planted after construction.
Categorically speaking, the 100 metres of island is transformed into tourists place by constructing some facilities. At the centre od all constructions reception is built, which is directly connected with pier through vehicle track. The vehicle track surrounds the reception and also connects restaurant with it.
The diagram reveals that on west and east side of reception some accommodations are constructed for tourists. There are nine accomodations on the east side of reception and six on the west side, all the accomodations are connected with each other through footpath, while; the western accomodations are connected to beach as well.
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- Some people think that children should learn how to compete but others think that children should be taught to cooperate to become more useful adults Express some reasons for both views and give your own opinion 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'constructions'' or 'construction's'?
Suggestion: constructions'; construction's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61643835616 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23754596638 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4116463261 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20493881847 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949399975458 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980939925195 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128840510417 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504091432125 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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