The monthly price of exported rice from Thailand and Vietnam from 2012 to 2015 Million dollars per tons

Essay topics:

The monthly price of exported rice from Thailand and Vietnam from 2012 to 2015 (Million dollars per tons)

The graph below shows the cost of rice exported from Thailand and Vietnam monthly from 2012 to 2015.
Overall, the price of exported rice from Thailand and Vietnam from 2012 to 2015 were not balanced with the average expense of rice from Vietnam lower than Thailand.
In 2012, Vietnam had the highest price for 12 months compare to 3 other years. From Thailand, the 2012 price were the highest from July to the end of 2012. Both payment of exported rice from both Vietnam and Thailand in 2012 were higher than the average. The high price were continuing to 2013. However, the fee seemed decrease steadily. Specially from Thailand, the price rapidly drop from highest to lowest overall compare to Vietnam was decrease slowly. The highest price of rice exported from Thailand was 550 million dollars per tons in 2 months December 2012 and January 2013 compare to that number from Vietnam was 410 million dollars per tons in August and September 2012 which was a large gap between the highest price. The lowest price was 400 million dollars per tons in December 2013 from Thailand and 300 million dollars per tons in Vietnam from January to March 2015.

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Average: 7.7 (9 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the lowest'.
Suggestion: to the lowest
...nd, the price rapidly drop from highest to lowest overall compare to Vietnam was decrease...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78894472362 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08049911166 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427135678392 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.276029291 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 5.23603664747 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.769849528419 0.215688989381 357% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.341812943606 0.103423049105 330% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.203591734819 0.0843802449381 241% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.594369594212 0.15604864568 381% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061403386149 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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