The number of tourists visiting Malaysia and Dubai from 1995 to 2003 is presented below.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in the diagrams below.
Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates, the information of visitors in Dubai and Malaysia between 1995 and 2003. Overall, more tourist went to visit malaysia from 1993 to 2000 and, afterwards visitors went to Dubai than Malaysia.
Malaysia was the highest position in visitors during the early period in contrast to Dubai. Trend began at 100 thousand then shows a dramatic increase of visitors over the following years until 2001 with more than 300 thousand . While, after that the number of visitors account for a rapid decline to below 250 thousand and which is 150 thousan less than the visitors of Dubai.
Similarly, most noticeable trend was Dubai visitors such as, mere 40 thousand in 1993 after a slight downward trend in the next year to approximately 35 thousand there was a rapid growth up to 1998 to above 150 thousand. The of visitors to Dubai climbed up to more than 300 thousand which is relatively same in both countries in 2001. Moreover, visitors trend to Dubai was considerably high to 400 thousand by 2003 before falling down to just 310 thousand in 2 years back.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion:
...e 150 thousand. The of visitors to Dubai climbed up to more than 300 thousand whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, similarly, then, while, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84782608696 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52972972973 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6189779234 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.23603664747 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144909972826 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819596638101 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602172638794 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122737417375 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667203051246 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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