One of your friends lives in another country. You want to spend some time working in that country. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should:
describe why you want to work in that country
tell him/her about your skills and experience
ask some questions related to work.
I hope you are well. I am so excited to inform you that, finally, I have got an opportunity to do my Ph.D. in physics from Canada. Yesterday, I received a letter from the king's university of Canada regarding my selection for the three year Ph.D. course. It is a superb opportunity for me to perceive good command on my subject. My doctorate course hours are from 10:00 am to 5:00 pm, Monday to Friday. I am free on weekend days; I have much leisure time from Saturday to Sunday. I decide to do some part-time job, which is best suited to my working experience and skills. So, I can improve my knowledge and working skills.
As you know, I have done masters of physics with specialization in particle physics and computational physics along with that I also have B.Ed. and M.ED degrees. I have five years of professional experience with a private degree college as guest faculty.
Please guide me to get job offers quickly and also tell me where the vacancies are available. Additionally, you also share all the details with me regarding the workplace.
I am looking for your response.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kings'' or 'king's'?
Suggestion: kings'; king's
...Yesterday, I received a letter from the kings university of Canada regarding my selec...
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Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ed
...l physics along with that I also have B.Ed. and M.ED degrees. I have five years of...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, look, regarding, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63917525773 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76822841042 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613402061856 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 1.53170731707 914% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7150126722 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2307692308 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12115766869 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482833148895 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416438288351 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735028222189 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344955866627 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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