Online sales for retail sectors in Canada

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Online sales for retail sectors in Canada

Online Sales for Retail Sectors in Canada

The Pie chart given below illustrates online sales for retail category in Canada for 5 years. It can be seen that food and beverage sectors was the most positive movement and home furnishing decreasead enormous in 5 years. But, overall 50% of all sectors grew. It is measured in precentage

From 2005, electronic and appliance succeded became substantial online sales for retail sectors reach 35%. A quarter of all controlled by home furnishing sectors. Followed by 22% from food sectors and video game sectors not win out as a rise sector.

In 2010, food and beverage category increased dramatically ascended 10 % and the video game sector rose reach 5%. Two others sectors were declined 5%. It was home furnishing and electronic and appliance

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 666.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 130.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12307692308 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37664837539 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61672886876 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7988138293 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4444444444 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 5.23603664747 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.522818097626 0.215688989381 242% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181051556288 0.103423049105 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.235298293208 0.0843802449381 279% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.458848355856 0.15604864568 294% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.333235579304 0.0819641961636 407% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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