the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013
The two pie charts illustrate data on the percentage of online customers for four different categories (books, travel, film/music, clothes) between 2003 and 2013 in New Zealand.
Overall, books and film/music retail industry experienced a slight increase while travel and clothes sales went down in ten years.
Although travel sales dropped by 7% from 36% in 2003 to 29% in 2013, this sector still took the lion’s share among retail sectors in New Zealand. Also, after ten years, there was a significant fall in online clothing retail from 24% to 16%, which turn it from one of the most popular goods into the least popular one.
In the same period, New Zealand saw dramatic growth in film/music sales, which just accounted for 21% in 2003 but then contributed 33% online sales in 2013. An increase of 3% in online sale (from 19% to 22%) switched the position of books to clothes retailing or in other words, books are no longer the least popular goods anymore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'clothe'.
Suggestion: clothe
...o 22% switched the position of books to clothes retailing or in other words, books are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, while, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90303030303 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43029547343 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660606060606 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 15.8113883008 43.030603864 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 134.833333333 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454403915352 0.215688989381 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218791829796 0.103423049105 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132708003285 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258024358212 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999597114627 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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