The photo attached shows the topic.
The charts provide the feedback of a survey about adult education. The bar chart illustrates the reason why they make a decision to study and the pie chart shows people attitude towards the way of sharing costs of courses.
Majority of people (40%) choose to study because of their interest in topic. Getting qualifications is the next important reason at 38%. 22% want to get better in their current job. The next reasons are improving job prospects or promotion and enjoying studying which 20% of people has chosen respectively. 12% study in order to be able to change jobs. Meeting new people is the least popular reason at 9%.
Information from pie chart shows that people think every individual should pay for courses (40%), while 35% consider that the responsibility falls on employer. Taxpayers also are the next option at 25%.
In conclusion, interest in a field is the most important factor in adult education and according to people opinion the tuitions also should be paid individually.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98203592814 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69427808991 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646706586826 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.202570318 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6363636364 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0591918228494 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0194195463865 0.103423049105 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326916858091 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0331018955853 0.15604864568 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208913040648 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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