The picture illustrates the working pattern of a heat-based balloon.
It can be seen that this kind of balloon has 3 parts which one is the envelope, one is the burner and one is the basket. It uses air mixed with a particular substance to make the power and fly the balloon.
From the bottom, there is a basket which consists of 2 propane cylinders where propane is mixed with cool air to produce flame to make hot air. The burner above the will heat up the mixture prepared in the 2 cylinders.
Moving up, there are ropes knotted with a big skirt which are responsible for connecting the basket, the burner and the envelope. On the envelope, there are panels, gores, and a parachute valve allowing hot air to escape at a controlled level. Inside this envelope, cool air is heavier which stays at the bottom, and the hotter the air, the lighter and higher it becomes.
- The diagram shows the life cycle of the honeybee
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- The bar chart below illustrates five different industries percentage share of Brazil s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53164556962 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42800516909 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2761774237 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 5.23603664747 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0784056128529 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420326719364 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458171569867 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650838866733 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050114057954 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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