The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made.
The pictures illustrates how fresh tomato is manufactured into tomato ketchup.
From the diagram, there are twelve stages how tomato ketchup is produced, starting from the harvest of the tomatoes to the packaging of the ketchup.
Firstly, the farmer goes to the farm to harvest a profuse amount of fresh tomatoes then put them in a basket. Secondly, the farmer will sort the tomatoes to separate the good ones from the rotten ones. After sorting the tomatoes, a truck is used to transport the tomatoes to the factory where the manufacturing of the ketchup begins. After skin, seeds and stalk have been removed from the vegetables, they are then filled into a container which will crush the tomatoes into a liquid form. After the crushing stage, three ingredients which are sugar, vinegar and salt are added to the liquid tomato, then it is placed on fire to boil. It is left for two hours to cool off after the boiling stage. Subsequently, the tomato ketchup is filled into a bottle and labelled, then packaged in a carton which will be distributed to a supermarket. At last, the tomato ketchup can now be served with hamburger and fries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'illustrate'.
Suggestion: illustrate
The pictures illustrates how fresh tomato is manufactured into t...
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Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... crush the tomatoes into a liquid form. After the crushing stage, three ingredients w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79187817259 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5357552887 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543147208122 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3348166337 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269439214531 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125912750962 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118734936317 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278379738959 0.15604864568 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106326522196 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.