The pictures show the layout of a cinema in 1980 and the same cinema now.
The two maps compare data about the development of the layout of a cinema over the period from 1980 until now.
As it can be seen from the maps that there has been an expansion from the east to the west of the movie theater. Furthermore, they remove the car park from the north to make way for two new cinemas.
In 1980, the cinema was largely vacant with solely two cinemas, the first of which was sited to the southwest of the entrance, the second of which was positioned to the east side. Over the next 40 years, the part of the cinema is erected with three additional cinemas, with the two original cinemas relocated to the left-hand side.
Other major growths consist of the addition of several facilities cater for the various need of moviegoers. Cinema one is rebuilt on the west side to pave a way for food, drinks, and relax room to serve customers. Moreover, the drinks service which was situated on the left side of the entrance in 1980 is converted into a DVD shop. The parts that are left unchanged include the toilet which is now sited between cinema one and two and the ticket box office to the left of the entrance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ma over the period from 1980 until now. As it can be seen from the maps that there...
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Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... make way for two new cinemas. In 1980, the cinema was largely vacant with solel...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o the east side. Over the next 40 years, the part of the cinema is erected with t...
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Line 4, column 488, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...box office to the left of the entrance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45933014354 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23953091727 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555023923445 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.487814159 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.555555556 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217470428744 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909033044028 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886606246351 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146853419889 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101471653219 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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