The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of eletricity used according to the number of occupants.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graph illustrates seven aspects of the energy used in a typical Australian household, and in addition, the table depicts different amount of electricity used in various number of people in the house.
According to the pie chart, it is clear to see that the biggest part of household energy comes to the heating ＆ cooling, with 38%. And the percentage of water heating is 25%, which is the second biggist part. Then, there are two same part of the household energy use, which is lighting and fridges ＆ freezers, with both is 7%. The last two part of the energy using are cooking and standby power, with 4% and 3% respectively. What's more, the proportion of other appliances, including clothes and dishwashers, entertainment and small appliances, is 16% which is coming to the third place.
As for the table, we can see that the amount of electricity used increases as the number of people in the house rises. When there is only one people, the amount of electricity is about 5000----6500 Kwh per year, and if the people number comes to two and three, the electricity used amount is 6000----8000 Kwh per year and 7500----10000 Kwh per year, respectively. If the people number is six or more, the amount of electricity is almost three times bigger than that of electricity used in one people house, with 12000----16000 Kwh per year.
In conclusion, heating ＆ cooling is the part of household using electricity most, and also more people in house will use more electricity.
Comments
The pie chart illustrates
The pie chart illustrates about the proportion of an energy consumed by different appliances in an average Australian home and also table provided the details about amount of electricity used in a typical Australian home with respect to the number of people in house. In general, the pie chart shows that the temperature control of both for heating and cooling, is the major user which is followed by water heating and also the table shows that energy consumed is increasing when the number of people is increasing.
heating and cooling devices are account for almost about 40% of from total energy, and water power heating consumes a quarter of total household power. Other appliances, such as dishwashers, televisions and smaller items, which are contributing about 16% of energy consumption. Slightly less than half of the energy consumption of previous about 7% is used for both refrigeration and lighting. Standby power comprises about 3% compared to stoves, ovens and other cooking equipment that are expended only 4% from household energy.
The table gives the details about electricity usage with respect to the number of people living in a house for a period of one typical year. Single person's electricity usage is about 5000 to 6500 kW per year and two people usage is between 6000 to 8500 when comparing with single user electricity power usage. Also, three person Australian household typically uses about 7500 to 10000 kW per year and six or more in a household consumption is about 12000 to 16000 Kw per year.
In general, all forms of heating and cooling of air temperature, use of refrigeration and cooking are the major consumption of energy in Australian houses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, then, third, as for, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85490196078 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80865909932 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478431372549 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.316560308 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.8 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22028765643 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103027516288 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797718654844 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161099651777 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802747389338 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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