The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000 The total budget was AED 315 billion Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

Essay topics:

The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000.
The total budget was AED 315 billion.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

The pie chart delineates how the UAE government spends the money between 10 sectors in the year 2000. Moreover, the total budget consisted of AED 315 billion.

The Social Security dominates 31. 9 % of the total budget in the UAE government spending report. The least was spent on the transport facility that was 2. 9 %. While, double the transport expenditure was spent on Housing heritage and environment(4. 8 %). An equal number of per cent was spent on Other expenditure and Debt interest that is, 7. 3 %. As in regards with law and order, 5. 4 % of the total budget was spent.

The significant expenditure to be observed in the field of Industry, agriculture and employment which was 4. 2 %. In regard to education(12. 1 %), it accounted for almost thrice the amount of Industry, agriculture and employment field. Likewise, Health and personal social services reported 16. 9% that was approximately four times the Industry, agriculture and employment section.

Thus, it is evident from the pie chart that, UAE government spends least on transport. On the other hand, it can be inferred that Social Security requires higher percentage of the total budget.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spends the least'.
Suggestion: spends the least
...from the pie chart that, UAE government spends least on transport. On the other hand, it can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, moreover, so, thus, while, in regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08947368421 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91280341186 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594736842105 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.781838969 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.4375 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.875 22.9334400587 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.09268292683 391% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251612855369 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716102866386 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941968332393 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164980433526 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828223372472 0.0819641961636 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.35 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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