The supplied two pie charts represent how much money was received for childrens^ charity and its outlay in USA during one year.
Overall, donated food shared as the biggest proportion among in other revenue sources as the program services which accounted for a significant amount of expenditure.
In detail, the total received amount was a slight higher than the amount of expenditure $53/561,580 and $53,224,896 respectively. With regards to revenue sources, donated food comprised of over the half of total charity by 86.6%, while category community contribution was the second place with 10.4 %. By following it, the program revenue shared 2.2 %, while both Investment income and government grants together accounted for 0.4 % as the same equal other kinds of income.
According to outlay, the program service was the largest proportion of 95.8%, whereas, the expenditure of fundraising category was 2.6 %, and management and general, in contrast, shared the lowest expenditure by 1.6%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49342105263 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8043461503 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638157894737 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.749914792 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.166666667 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 47.0 1.69756097561 2769% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119948650883 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666770609418 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950913211846 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870814683308 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107305586236 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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