The pie chart shows the main sources of energy for USA in 1980 and 1990

Essay topics:

The pie chart shows the main sources of energy for USA in 1980 and 1990

The pie charts give information about the proportion of five different sources of energy in the USA: oil, natural gas, coal, hydroelectric power and nuclear power between 1980 and 1990. It is noticeable that the amount of oil-consuming decreased and that of hydroelectric power still maintained. By contrast, there was a significant growth in the amount of coal and nuclear power using as one of the main sources.

Oil consumption accounted for 42% in 1980. Despite its dramatic decreasing to 33%, oil was still has a good proportion in 1990. The percentage of natural gas-consuming also saw a slight decline but only decreased from 26% to 25%. That of hydroelectric power remained at 5% after ten years.

On the other hand, the proportion of using nuclear power was similar to the percentage of hydroelectric power in 1980, at exactly 5 percent. This then made up about 10% in 1990 while the rate of coal using grew from almost a fifth to just under a third.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, third, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89387434482 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9641814938 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2222222222 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183044728529 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705550187852 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939189665536 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116568872261 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674616124442 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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