The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
Given is the pie charts illustrate the differences between water consumption used for households, industry and argriculture in San Diego Country, California and Worldwide.
Overall, resiential sector accounts for the vast majority of water usage in the two American regions while Agriculture represents the highest proportion of water used in another part of the world
To embark on, the percentage of the residential water use in San Diego account for over a half, at 60%, while, the figure for California is significantly lower, at 39%. A notable fact is that the water used for residential in the world as a whole has a mere minority of 8%.
The percentage of industrial water consumption in three main areas has no remark difference, at 23% in two part of the world and 33% for the rest area respectively. While 17% and 28% are experienced in San Diego and California’s agriculture, the global water occupy the biggest consumption, at 69%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07643312102 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16217502464 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.3774589272 43.030603864 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.4 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316788504454 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172120810657 0.103423049105 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624835565295 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195930813703 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514245994234 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.