The pie charts below give information about the household expenditure
of an average US family in different years.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie chart delineates how the Average Household Expenditure is spent. In addition to that, the two charts compare the data for the year 1970 and 2004 in regards with 6 fields.
Overall, in the year 1970, the needs such as mortgage, food and clothing each cover almost one fourth of the expenses. In contrast with that, after 34 years mortgage dominates the expenditure.
In the year 1970, the least per cent was accounted for childcare. Whereas the utilization of the money on clothing, was recorded 22%. Likewise, the range for food(25 %) and mortgage(26 %) expenses merely differed by 1 %. However, substantial amount to be noticed is in the case of transport and entertainment was equal(13 %) for both the expenditures.
After 34 years of period, the trend was almost differed in the case of mortgage(50 %). The expenditure dominated and percentage soared by almost the half which was spent before 34 years. As in regards with transport(5 %), food(12 %) and clothing(10 %), the percent dropped by almost the half that was recorded in 1970. The crucial reading to be considered is in accordance with childcare. It is the only expenditure that surged by 9 % as compared to others. Moreover, over the years an average expenditure spent on the entertainment sustained an equal amount.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, moreover, so, whereas, in addition, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09047619048 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86643812885 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.5335523672 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.3571428571 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131358250977 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498882224533 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583376081754 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859702472272 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550694392428 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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