The pie charts below show average household expenditure in Hong Kong and Britain in the year 2000
The two charts show the expenditure of household in Hong Kong and Britain in 2000 in five different categories. As can be seen, Britain had the greatest proportion on other goods, that was 36%, while in Hong Kong was just 28%.
By contrast, in Hong Kong the greatest proportion was on housing, at 32%, compared to 18% in Britain. The next highest was on food at 27% in Hong Kong, but in Britain it was lower, at 22% for food. Another expenses in Britain was transport, at 17%, whereas in Hong Kong it was a lot smaller, at 9%. Both in Britain and in Hong Kong, the lowest percentage was clothing, 4% in Hong Kong and 7% for Britain.
To conclude, the pie charts give information that other goods, food and housing were the primary expenditure with the total of Britain expenses in transport and other goods higher than that of Hong Kong.
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To pay charts depict how
To pay charts depict how Britain in Hong Kong incurred money On five different types of expect varied in 2000.
Overview, In Britain maximum money spent on goats and services whereas in Hong Kong housing got priority but clothing had least expenditure in both the countries.
At the fleeting glance, it is clear that other goods and services at 36% of expenditure contrarily in Hong Kong it only 28% .
while in Hong Kong was just 28%.
while in Hong Kong it was just 28%.
Sentence: Another expenses in Britain was transport, at 17, whereas in Hong Kong it was a lot smaller, at 9.
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