The figures illustrate the proportion of online sales for travel, film or music, books and clothes in New Zealand in two different years. In general, travel and film and music made the largest proportion of the total online sales in two unequal years.
In 2003, the online sales of travel industries in New Zealand accounted for 36% of the total sector, it was 12% higher than the clothing sector. However, in ten years, both categories had declined sharply to 29 and 16%.
Film and music made the third largest portion of the overall sales in 2003 (21%), in 2013, the figure rose to 33%. As for the sector of books, it had increased slightly from 19% in 2003 to 22% in 2013.
In 2003, the clothing industry boasted an impressive 24% of
total online sales in New Zealand. However, by 2013, the figure
had fallen considerably to 16%.
In conclusion, it is clear that between 2003 and 2013, the online sales of travel and clothing in New Zealand had dropped, while the sales of film and music and books had grown.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, third, while, as for, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67955801105 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30378128276 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475138121547 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.762687532 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1111111111 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240138684862 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118427153499 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704841619537 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129256156623 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759611819653 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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