The pie charts below show the popularity of different political parties in a countrt before and after the election The election was won by the Conservative party and they formed government with the Liberal Democrats party

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The pie charts below show the popularity of different political parties in a countrt before and after the election. The election was won by the Conservative party and they formed government with the Liberal Democrats party.

The pie charts give the data of the various political parties in a nation, which is one month before the previous election and 6 months and 12 months status after the election. Overall, the Conservative party gained the highest popularity and they formed government with the Liberal Democrats.

It is clear from the chart that, since the most popular Conservative party accounted for 41% gradually increased its attention among public within 6 months after the election, it saw a 10% of reduction after 1 year period. Similarly, Liberal Democrats also experienced considerable declining from 19% to 8%.

In contrast, with regards to Labour party accounted for 26% before the election and then it witnessed a small drop after 6 months before increasing to 32% after a year. The increasing trend observed in the case of undecided category. Although there were only 4% popularity reported before election, 12 months later, it was two times that of the percentage of 6 months after the election. However, Green party remained same popularity of 10% one month before and 6 months later, it reached 5% after 12 months.

In conclusion, even though Conservative party won the election and formed government with the help of Liberal Democrats party, the popularity of this parties significantly declined among public after a year.

Votes
Average: 7.9 (38 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, similarly, so, then, in conclusion, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19069767442 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79125575815 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539534883721 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6318106225 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447505296921 0.215688989381 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190191853282 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122697407497 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305524611984 0.15604864568 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102903367733 0.0819641961636 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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