The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.
The pie charts illustrate how many students give information on full-time and part-time about their university services, namely IT supports and opening hours.
Looking at the graphs, it is immediately obvious that the majority of students satisfied with two full-time services than their part-time counterparts. Besides, there is much positive feedback with regard to the opening hours than IT support.
Regarding IT support, much than half of the surveyed full-time students said that they were very gratified with this service, while only a fifth of part-time scholar reported that they were so comfortable. By contrast, there was an opposite trend can be seen at the number of disciples unhappy with IT support, at 15% of the full-time schoolboy, while the figure for part-time learners was more three times than full-time pupils. The proportion of both types of undergrads being quite content with this service was relatively the same, at about a third.
Considering opening hours, the bulk of full-time and part-time learners felt extremely happy with the current opening hours, at 87% and 72% respectively. On the other hand, only 1% of the examined full-time undergraduates were not satisfied with the opening hours, whereas the figure for part-time schooner was a little higher, at 5%. Finally, the remaining 12% of full-time pupils sensed quite blissful with this service, as opposed to nearly a quarter of part-time students.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'supports'?
Suggestion: supports
...ng hours than IT support. Regarding IT support, much than half of the surveyed full-ti...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, if, look, regarding, so, third, whereas, while, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33920704846 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77083055945 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568281938326 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1947575745 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37391961652 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185007607436 0.103423049105 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104893016604 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272813103216 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699630398636 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'supports'?
Suggestion: supports
...ng hours than IT support. Regarding IT support, much than half of the surveyed full-ti...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, if, look, regarding, so, third, whereas, while, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33920704846 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77083055945 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568281938326 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1947575745 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37391961652 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185007607436 0.103423049105 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104893016604 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272813103216 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699630398636 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.