Pie graphs show nutritional consistency of two dinners

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Pie graphs show nutritional consistency of two dinners

The pie charts demonstrate the nutritional consistency of medium baked potato and macaroni. Overall, carbohydrat dominates the nutrition in both of dinners, while the least nutritons in medium baked potato and macaroni are saturated fat and other nutriens respectively.

Initially, medium baked potato contains mostly of carbohydrat and protein, dominating over a one third and a quarter of its nutrition. Glucose and other nutritions have a minority percentage, ranked 15% for each of it. Moreover, this baked potato contaminates only 10% of saturated fat, which also the least nutrition in that meal.

Apart from medium baked potato nutritions, macaroni has over doubled carbohydrat nutrition than in medium baked potato’s protein, stood as the highest nutrition. Hence, saturated fat is the second highest porportion, and it contaminates 21% in macaroni, while glocose and protein each has about a half percentage of it. Other nutriens however, has a tiny proportion in macaroni contamination, ranging as the least nutrition in macaroni.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, moreover, second, so, third, while, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65189873418 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03592362197 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1847693016 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.625 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100674763297 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618317517493 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069529751249 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846783328179 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448117046137 0.0819641961636 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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