Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the change of a health center building in 2005 and the present day. It is noticeable that there is a significant change in the number of rooms, and the parking area is extended.
To begin with, the car parking has been extended in the present day to 30 spaces as well as the seat spaces have been enlarged. Besides, there have been additional rooms includes children areas, two consulting room, and minor operations room.
To continue, the entrance room has been relocated to the downside. Likewise, the consulting rooms have been restricted to the east, which is on the right side of the building. On the other hand, in the seat areas are linked to the consulting room, office, physiotherapy, and minor operation room. In the present day, the garden is located in the north of the building where placed beside minor operation and physiotherapy room.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, likewise, well, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87248322148 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6505734078 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543624161074 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.0931424869 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.75 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0741855340885 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408403982493 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597798206931 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601302651404 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294264850499 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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