Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day.
The two given maps show how a health centre has changed between 2005 and now.
In general, many significant changes have been made to this health centre, such as the appearance of new rooms and the renovation in layout.
In the present day, a car park to the south was expanded its capacity from 12 to 30 spaces. In addition, an entrance to the south in 2005 is now moved to the south-west, which also led to the relocation of a reception desk to this direction in order to make sure it is easy to reach from the entrance. Moreover, due to this adjustment, an office to the west was reduced in size, and a CR3 to the south-west was shifted to the south-east, where CR1 used to be, so as to make way for the introduction of a children’s play area.
Furthermore, there is the relocation and increase in the number of CR rooms, from three to four. The CR1 and CR2 to the east are diminished and moved to the south, where the former entrance was, while a new CR4 is constructed in the erstwhile CR2’s land to the east. Besides, a minor operations room is built to the north-west, which is near the office. Lastly, a physiotherapy room to the north-east stays unchanged during the period of time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 93, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nded its capacity from 12 to 30 spaces. In addition, an entrance to the south in 2...
^^
Line 4, column 461, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...o the south-east, where CR1 used to be, so as to make way for the introduction of a chil...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 429, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e north-east stays unchanged during the period of time.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, so, while, as to, in addition, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44343891403 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69317830708 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579185520362 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8807553999 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.111111111 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 5.23603664747 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0850948920304 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412665354655 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073536315515 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773836077726 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938472603086 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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