The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after development.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the university’s sports center at present and the plans for its future renovation.
Overall, a look at the map reveals that the university sports center will undergo dramatic changes in the future, with the most significant changes being the outdoor courts, which will be cleared to make way for some facilities for dancing, swimming, changing. In addition, a sports shop and a cafe will be built, whereas the main buildings will remain unchanged.
To the west of the main buildings, not only the outdoor courts will be turned into a leisure pool, but they will also add a new changing room with a sports shop on the side in the south of the pool. Moreover, the entrance and the main buildings, which is including a 25m swimming pool, a changing room, a gym, reception, and seating area, will not experience alterations. The only slight exception is that the gym on the northern end of the building will be lengthened eastwards.
Look to the east of the main buildings, the remain outdoor courts will be demolished in order to set up a sports hall and some other facilities. Two dancing rooms will be added nearby that sports hall. Additionally, they will also erect another changing room with a cafe on the side in the southeast corner of the center.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...Look to the east of the main buildings, the remain outdoor courts will be demolished in or...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...will be demolished in order to set up a sports hall and some other facilities. Two dan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, then, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78733031674 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65625890869 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52036199095 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8595575083 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.555555556 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163263529808 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803645295261 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333146574213 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112280223525 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224931409855 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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