The maps below illustrates the design plans of a university’s sport centre before and after the improvement. It can be clearly seen that two outdoor courts are removed, as a result, all of the facilities are arranged in the indoor court. Most importantly, there are plenty of facilities that will be built and developed. Something that will be remained the same are the centre pool, seating, changing room, and reception.
Despite the changing room is not changed, there are two additional changing room that can be found on two corners of the building, one is beside sports shop and the other one is next to the cafe. To the west of the architecture, there is a huge leisure pool, beside the old changing room. Moreover, the gym will be expanse lengthwise that almost stuck to the wall if it is not obstructed by the new dance studio. Nevertheless, there are two dance studios located side by side.
Sports hall is planned to be situated between the seating and dance studio. However, this will not bigger than the 25 m pool. In completion, the plans are expected to improve the facilities and placed it on the indoor area.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s below illustrates the design plans of a university's sport centre before a...
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Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...utdoor courts are removed, as a result, all of the facilities are arranged in the indoor c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75634517766 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71599695127 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548223350254 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5048206268 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1818181818 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119994000342 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522413505671 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722098696274 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897179002185 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543232480951 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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