THE TWO LAYOUT DEMONSTRATE PRESENT UNIVERSITY SPORT CENTRE AND PROPOSED SPORT CENTRE RENOVATIONS AND NEW CONSTRUCTIONS.
TWO OUTDOOR COURTS GOING TO BE DEMOLISHED .MEANWHILE, WEST OUTDOOR COURT WILL BE REPLACED BY EXPANDED NEW LEISURE POOL AND EAST OUTDOOR POOL WILL BE REPLACED BY SPORTS HALL .GYM EXPECT TO BE EXPANDED .HOWEVER, OTHER MIDDLE CONSTRUCTIONS WILL BE KEPT UNTOUCHED .SPORT SHOPS AND CAFÉ WILL BE BUILT INSIDE THE RECEPTION SPACE .IN ADDITION TWO OTHER NEW CHANGING ROOMS PLANNED TO CONSTRUCT ON THE WEST AND EAST CORNERS OF THE SPORT CENTRE.BRAND NEW TWO OTHER DANCING STUDIOS WILL BE BUILT ON EAST END OF THE SPORT CENTRE.
FINALLY, OVERALL SPACE FOR SPORT CENTRE PLANNED TO EXPAND WE CAN CLEARLY SEEN PROPOSED SPORT CENTRE WILL HAVE MUCH MORE FACILITIES THAN PRESENT
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...WO OUTDOOR COURTS GOING TO BE DEMOLISHED .MEANWHILE, WEST OUTDOOR COURT WILL BE R...
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...O BE DEMOLISHED .MEANWHILE, WEST OUTDOOR COURT WILL BE REPLACED BY EXPANDED NEW L...
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...OOR POOL WILL BE REPLACED BY SPORTS HALL .GYM EXPECT TO BE EXPANDED .HOWEVER, OTHE...
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...Y SPORTS HALL .GYM EXPECT TO BE EXPANDED .HOWEVER, OTHER MIDDLE CONSTRUCTIONS WILL...
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...DLE CONSTRUCTIONS WILL BE KEPT UNTOUCHED .SPORT SHOPS AND CAFÉ WILL BE BUILT INSID...
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...WILL BE BUILT INSIDE THE RECEPTION SPACE .IN ADDITION TWO OTHER NEW CHANGING ROOMS...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 662.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 127.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2125984252 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59849677783 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 186.3 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 183.167197451 43.030603864 426% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 220.666666667 112.824112599 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.3333333333 22.9334400587 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.23603664747 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151243460361 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136220141121 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430294693257 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136220141121 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430294693257 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.3 13.2329268293 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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