Prices change for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugar and sweets, carbonated and drinks
The line graph indicated information about prices change three different food groups from 1979 to 2009 include fresh fruits,sugar and sweets , carbonated drinks in USA.
Overall, it show that prices for three group increased very quickly. But only the price for fresh fruits and vegetables are the highest in all consumer index.
The chart show the same consumer prices, particularly from 1979 to 1989 period rate of growth is steadily, with 60 -100 respectively for sugar and sweets,fresh fruits and vegetables, carbonated drinks. Although their prices also rose but in 1991, sugar and sweets fluctuated and gained 200 ,at the same time carbonated drinks’s index rose more slowly than sugar and sweets only 150.
For fresh fruits and vegetables rose sharply in 1989 and 2009 period within 30-years developed steadily at the level 300 to 330. Significantly when they compare to the consumer -price index passing easily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sugar
...s from 1979 to 2009 include fresh fruits,sugar and sweets , carbonated drinks in USA. ...
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Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...09 include fresh fruits,sugar and sweets , carbonated drinks in USA. Overall, it...
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Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shows'?
Suggestion: shows
...carbonated drinks in USA. Overall, it show that prices for three group increased v...
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'shows'.
Suggestion: shows
...ghest in all consumer index. The chart show the same consumer prices, particularly ...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fresh
...0 -100 respectively for sugar and sweets,fresh fruits and vegetables, carbonated drink...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gar and sweets fluctuated and gained 200 ,at the same time carbonated drinks'...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30612244898 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62548475471 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6407918176 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458726054378 0.215688989381 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183418882513 0.103423049105 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082674543601 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25118092199 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725568117923 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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