The process that is used to manufacture the bricks for a building industry.

Essay topics:

The process that is used to manufacture the bricks for a building industry.

Overall, there are 7 processes to produce a fine brick. Excavation of clay from the earth is done, surfacing of clay performed. Bricks pass through heating and cooling systems before packaged and transported.

The foremost stage is excavation of clay from the ground by an excavator. The clay is placed into a metal grid for separation of different particles, as they it is moved by a roller and mixed with sand and water. It is of note, there are 2 processes which can either be done, whereby, a wire cutter is used to shape wet bricks or a moulding tray can be used for required shape and size.

Furthermore, the wet bricks are put in the dry oven for 24-48 hours. They are moved to a first kiln with a moderate temperature of 200 degrees-980degrees celsius to harden the brick. It is transferred to a second kiln for further hardening with higher temperature of 870-1300 degrees celsius. moreover, when the desired strength and outlook is achieved, they are placed in a cooling chamber for 48-72 hours. When the desired coolness is accomplished, it is packaged and ferried to the recipients by the truck for delivery.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...tion of different particles, as they it is moved by a roller and mixed with sand a...
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Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dry oven for 24-48 hours. They are moved to a first kiln with a moderate tempera...
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Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...8 hours. They are moved to a first kiln with a moderate temperature of 200 degre...
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Line 9, column 296, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...emperature of 870-1300 degrees celsius. moreover, when the desired strength and outlook ...
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Line 9, column 487, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ished, it is packaged and ferried to the recipients by the truck for delivery.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85519009063 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548717948718 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7207785956 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0909090909 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229997697713 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825368419702 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069607471457 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147976000196 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257354831998 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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