Some people argue that formal education should start for children as early as possible, while others think that it should not start until 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Essay topics:

Some people argue that formal education should start for children as early as possible, while others think that it should not start until 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The education is the most essential and powerful weapon to reach at a peak of anyone. Whereas, there are different pros and cons of begin early education but parents should forming the education criteria of infant till the age of 07 years, while I agree to commence late education of child.

This essay will discuss the advantages of late start of infant’s education that eventually helpful to brought-up their mind accordingly. Furthermore, a child can learn many things on the basis of home’s environment which is being thought by their parents. Moreover, parents have so many attribute for their child to better take care of infants rather than school teachers. In addition, parents may turn infant’s tendency respectively.

In contrast, many people enroll their child in early age to acquire batter feedback from infants and keep on trying to move their tendency towards the education which is detrimental effect of their health. Moreover, some parents send their child deliberately whether they feel uncomfortable at the time of beginning. Additionally, many of students are being ignored by the teacher in case of inadequacy of less understanding of student.

Consequently, the early child education period is the best time to brought-up their mind accordingly whether it is school or home, meanwhile parents should cater the infant’s enduring level not to overlook disadvantages.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ng level not to overlook disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44545454545 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02559330975 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604545454545 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2351441883 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.8 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 5.23603664747 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132056091754 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506802450709 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525840256037 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886771327161 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399536715431 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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