While some may think that, accepting an unfortunate event such as poverty, lack of job satisfaction is a good approach to handling life issues, others believe that it is better to make attempts at changing the situation. In my opinion, I believe that trying to improve bad circumstances would benefit people in life.
On the one hand, many people have adapted to their present status even though they never planned to be where they currently find themselves. This can be as a result of failure or lack of opportunities. For example, due to limited job opportunities for graduates, the few who are fortunate to get jobs that are not as promising as expected will continue on the job as long as it is paying their bills. this can consequently lead to frustration and unfulfillment hence living a stressful and unhappy life.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that making improvements no matter how small can significantly add positively to one's wellbeing. for instance, two years ago I had to quit my job in pursuit of higher education so as to improve my knowledge and skill in my career in order to get a higher paying job. Thankfully, I am currently employed in a bigger firm and with a higher salary which has significantly improved my life both financially and mentally.
In conclusion, accepting the unfavoured situation can negatively impact one"s life, I believe that going an extra mile to change event is beneficial to one's life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: This
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Suggestion: For
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...a mile to change event is beneficial to ones life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91093117409 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98454442922 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623481781377 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0482355797 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.3 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.23603664747 286% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196028960607 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730448326 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732444540085 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123102966339 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103674070738 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.