Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music brings happiness in our life and gives us reasons to smile. While there are several ways to bind people of various culture together, music is one of the most effective means to do that, and most of the people agree with this notion. This essay will discuss why other ways to bring people of multilingual society together also important, but why music is the best way to do so.
Music of a particular society reflects the mindset of the people of that society. Our ancestors had developed the music to express their happiness and to celebrate auspicious moments with joy. As every human being is different, the method of celebration is also different, hence music is also different. Moreover, humans always have a tendency to learn new things and always explore various places from ages. In this context, music places a vital role because a beautiful tune of music always attracts our attention quickly and force us to learn this new music, and eventually we come to know about the culture of that particular society from where that music originates.
However, there are various means through which people can share various culture taste to other culture. For instance, sharing of cuisines and garments also help societies to infuse their culture to other cultures. While sharing foods and clothes with each other nations or societies, the culture exchanges also happens. But, the penetration of one culture to other culture is little bit slowly via foods and clothes compare to that of music because people's body may take time to accept food of other culture, for example. That is why, music this treated to be the best way to show culture variety to other society.
To conclude, although other means like sharing of food and clothes are also useful methods to interchange culture of one society to others, the music is the most useful means to do so. People may take time to accept new food habits and new attire as our body and mind set don't want to move out of comfort zone easily. However, as new musical tone attracts our mind spontaneously, the sharing of culture becomes super easy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 377, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...tion of one culture to other culture is little bit slowly via foods and clothes compare to...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...and new attire as our body and mind set dont want to move out of comfort zone easily...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 965.302439024 181% => OK
No of words: 360.0 196.424390244 183% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86388888889 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 3.73543355544 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37611409867 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 106.607317073 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480555555556 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 283.868780488 198% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5822785252 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4375 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 3.70975609756 350% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257269188317 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961113638408 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775544339723 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179869929965 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10160161614 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 40.7170731707 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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